| "A What If Story..." Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Luc On: August 08, 2003 19:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's nice but too short. think ya' could lengthen the next chapters? the story's nice though plus i haven't really read stories involving... ya' know. |
Reviewed By: Nora Neko On: July 20, 2002 06:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice story, and I loved how you brought Ascot to Earth. I don't generally read Ascmi fics but this one looked interesting, so I thought I'd give it a try. BTW are you aware that you spelled Cephrio wrong each time you wrote it? It's C-e-p-h-r-i-o not C-e-f-r-i-o just so ya know. Other than that, great story. |
Reviewed By: someonenooneknows [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2002 06:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
You need to put more chapters to keep it geting more intersting |
Reviewed By: Chia-chan On: July 11, 2002 00:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Font Color
I like the beginning a lot! I think Umi likes Clef more in the
OVA than the actual anime....though I haven't seen it all yet so...
^_^;
Anyway...
It's kawaii but I want to see more Umi/Ascot action...It would have been nicer
without all that Drusilla stuff but I guess it was your own idea and it was neat especially
the chanting part I understood some of it (Latin parts mainly) but only because I take Spanish...LOL
Thanks for the good read but do you have any more chapters, eh?
More action! Please! ^_~ I wish they stayed in Cephiro but earth is good too! (Cephiro would be good if
they weren't living with Hikaru and Fuu in the castle...)
Am I blabbing? Yes I am. You've inspired me to write my own! I'll be off now!
;-)
~Kate-chan~ |
Reviewed By: death'sbestfriend On: May 23, 2002 01:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
hey, this is intresting! update soon! |
Reviewed By: ryoku [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 00:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was qutie keep going |
