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| "The pregnancy of Kusakabe Maron, resulting in Hikara" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: sumomo48 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2009 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story. maron's mom is going to get really mad or upset knowing the daughter her and her ex husband abandoned so many years ago has already started a family of her own and didn't tell them. and who does she think she is?! she can't just walzt in expecting everything is alright and act like she never left her alone to fend and learn about life for herself. and expect her only daughter to abandoned her entire life, family, and her friends who have been more family to her than she and her ex have. she probably doesn't know what she put maron threw when she was all alone thinking that she had no one who loved her and everyone hated her except for miyoko and her family. it's like she doesn't even know her anymore. what kind of mother puts her child threw that kind of trauma? what will she do knowing that she has a granddaughter and a son in law? i love your story. PPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEE up date A.S.A.H.P. (as soon as humanly possible)
| Reviewed By: zorosgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 16:05 CST
Comment/Review:
yo Ashy-girl the story rules it over flowing with sespence so get on with next chapter
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