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| "My Christmas Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: chiyosama808 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, while i like the concept of the story, it seems... incomplete. I think that there should be more the the story. I really like your style though I hope that you will continue. Thank you!
| Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2007 13:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry, but I did not like this story. It was so out of character. Kagome would not kill herself. That is just dumb. She might go home, that I would believe. She is way to strong a person to kill herself. Miroku does not talk to Kagome like that and he most certainly would STOP HER!
| Reviewed By: Mirage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 23:26 CST
Comment/Review:
......that is stupid. ok, maybe that is harsh of me to say, but everything was just too weird. miroku was out of character, the plot was... well, nonexistent, and the grammar made me want to rip my own eyes out... it was illegible half of the time. sorry, but i hated it... if you expanded it a little, actually explained more of the plot and fixed the grammer mistakes it'd be a whole lot better.
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