|"Serenity" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2008 09:55 CDT|
Lovely! It sets things right and it's very much in the tone of the original.
| Title: Mm.|
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 20:55 CDT
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
I never really liked Peter Pan, but initially, it was because the way things ended. xD Excellent job. I love your writing style.
| Title: Yes!|
Reviewed By: Princess_Lalaith [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2007 13:08 CST
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Yes! Yes! YES! Wendy stays with Peter! I think it's kind of sad that her family would forget everything about her, but she just had to stay with him... I love fics of this couple (especially ever since I saw the movie they made with actors, where they give Wendy a much more important role as she learns how to spar and that kind of things, unlike the simple storyteller-mother figure she was in the original movie). Anyway, great fic. Write more of this couple please!