|
| "Sweet Nothings" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: anon. On: August 03, 2007 17:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is awesome i hope you plan on continuing it. I feel so sorry for Bulma, but what made him run to Chi Chi? and mean what honestly happen between them; did they actually have sex or did they put on a show for Bulma? Well, whatever happened i think you should have Bulma leave his ass for Goku, see if he likes them apples lol! Please Update this fic!!!!!
| Reviewed By: Subu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 01:12 CST
Comment/Review:
Good story. Bulma is a genius, so I'm sure she'll find a way to get back at them. Please update
| Reviewed By: zola21 On: January 03, 2007 11:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Bulma. I hope she finds a way to get back at Vegeta and Chi Chi. Great story. Update asap.
|
|
|
