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| "Reflections of Ruin" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] | Reviewed By: Quontir [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2009 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I remembered liking this quite a bit and it is still good.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2007 01:50 CST
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It's good to see more of this story, though the ending does seem abrupt, and not quite what I expected. Still, it is good. I hope to see more of this storyline soon. Continue to write, and I hope to see more soon. Update again soon, ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2007 18:58 CST
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Write this story to the lees. Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 14:38 CST
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OH. CRAP. Well, that's a fantastic scary as shit update. I think I crapped myself. Oh well. Keep updating, it's not quite worth the wait, but the story is awesome. Next time, update sooner than 4 months, okay? Ja ne.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2007 13:32 CDT
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COOL, UPDATE!!! close to months without an update, and you post a giant chapter like this one, so of course I'm gonna be happy about it! Anyway, please update soon, and of course, as usual, Ryouga will be summoned back either easily, or be lost and come back as the sole remaining Daimon (I mean, really, who CAN get Ryouga to get someplace quickly?) Anyway, tahnks for the update, later.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 21:24 CDT
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The last two chapters are very good, and very in the vein of the manga, as I mentioned before. Please keep this up. I look forward to the next chapter.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 10:35 CDT
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This story is AWESOME!!! Anyway, I look very much foward to the next chapter. And hey, even Ranma can't be the strongest forever. Sometimes you have to let things out. Thank you for such a good job. Well, update when you chapters of this caliber. Later.
| Reviewed By: 117 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 31, 2007 10:27 CDT
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Your fanfic surprised me! I never thought that a Ranma/SM/Cthulu Mythos would work out without being cheesy but you've done it! Amazingly enough! I've seen NGE/Cthulu Mythos and even a Ranma/Cthulu Crossover but never a crossover where Ranma/SM/Cthulu are all in it together. Keep the crossover restricted to those three animes ... Yes ... try not to add in more than three if possible. They get out of line and the reader loses interest after awhile (yes ... I've experienced it and it was not a pleasant experience). Keep writing in this manner and you will continue to draw more readers. Bye ...^_^
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 08:41 CDT
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Damn, if only more people reviewed this story, it's really gotten good. First, old Queen Serenity was manipulative, as was necessary, and did a really good psychological war, one that really allowed Ranma to find herself again, as a woman, to be herself when she was a man, and that proves her skills as a ruler, awesome of you to include that. I think you probably based this all off of a combo of the original manga and the Cthulu, and I think it is strangely appropriate for this story. Not to mention awesome as ever. Thank you for updating as often as you have lately, and I look very much forward to the next chapter. I truly hope Akane can be saved, but I don't think she can be. Still, whatever, I look forward to more of this awesome story. So, please keep writing, and update soon, I look foward to every new chapter of this story. And now I gotta go, later.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 23:24 CST
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First off, this stroy is awesome. Second, I want more chapters. MANY more chapters. Because the story has just gotten to a good part, and needs to be continued. So please continue to write. Personally, I love butch female form Ranma (always amusing as hell, and imagine her getting her first period *blanches* wait, I don't want to know that) not to mention, guy with fangs? Oh crap, with Ryouga would be rather scary. *sigh* Anyway, I love the story, and I want to see mreo fo it. Please write more to this one soon, okay?
| Reviewed By: SilentHypoCrit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2007 16:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
That, was a great stroy to read so far. Sometimes almost a little bit to fast progressing for my tastes but that maybe due to me hoping not to end to fast. But it works in my opinion. And it hast most interesting twist build into it to keep at interesting. On a minor agende: you maybe should have stayed off the Japanes Vokabulary except were really no other English word might fit. Most of the time it is acceptable but if thing like in Chapter One happen its just... ->"Okaeri," Ranma announced quietly. Okaeri (nasais) meaning is "Welcom back." not quite fitting to say for the one returning, don't you think? If you want to use Japanes try "Tadaima". Though I really would advise you to use it sparcely. Fanboy/girlism is downgrading any story.
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