| Reviewed By: NERVSGC [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 03:44 CDT|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
This is a good story. I think you should keep going with this story and put more chapters to it. I know you said it was a one shot, but it good story to keep going. I know a good story when I see one, I have read a lot of good stories and your's is one of them. This story is to good to be a one shot story.