| "When Tezuka Had Fallen For Her" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rei Kuroko On: August 12, 2014 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story and I am just beyond tears that it was
never finished...I guess I'll just have to imagine what happens
next? Such as, is her relative ACTUALLY alive? Does Sumire adopt
her? Does Tezuka choose Nami or Ringo? SO MANY QUESTIONS. I still
loved it though~
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Title: Thanks
Reviewed By: Irene On: June 21, 2009 23:51 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for a great fic with an good storyline! i can't seen to find it on fanfiction.net so if could give me the link that would be great. please send the link at irenewong374@yahoo.com.au Thanks
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Title: continuation
Reviewed By: xi-chan14 On: May 02, 2008 10:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
cute story! the idea of tezuka falling in love. haha. Though im not really a fan of tezuka (syuusuke goes first!)i was so happy i found a non-yaoi/ non-shounen-ai fic so i thought of reading it. Im not yet done reading all the chapters, pero nakita ko kasi yun author's note mo kaya nag-iwan na ako ng review! ^.^ note: my first comment was cut. i dont know why. so im making another one.
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Reviewed By: xi-chan14 On: May 02, 2008 10:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute story! the idea of tezuka falling in love. haha. Though im not really a fan of tezuka (syuusuke
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Reviewed By: BlueMemoirs [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 05:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done an admirable job on this story =) It holds emotion and other feelings in which i cannot seem to describe. Reading this, was a great pleasure and i thank you for sharing it.
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Reviewed By: muttz On: January 04, 2008 18:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! Very nice. You jump around between tenses, though. (You'll have past, present and future tense in the same sentence.) It'd be a good idea to look for a beta. Many people have had the idea to make Tezuka fall in love with an OC, but you've been very creative with Ringo. This is really a very enjoyable fic, and I like that you seem to welcome constructive criticism. I've been reading it all the way through, and it's been enjoyable to not to have to wait for updates. Guess I'm going to have to get used to that. :( Update soon!
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Title: Marvelous!
Reviewed By: anime_addictgirl On: September 08, 2007 08:17 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marvelous! Me and my sister were jumping because of the enjoyment, and of course the romance! I'd like to know when is the chapter 17 coming out cause i can't wait to read it! Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: ldymoon (nsi) On: July 13, 2007 23:23 EDT
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I am so enjoying your story, I hope that you do well in all your studies since your working so hard to get them done. And, I'll be patiently waiting for the next chapter. K.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 22:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
I just found this fic on fanfiction.net, so I probably will review it on there instead of here from now on since I use that site much more.
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Reviewed By: Raluca On: July 09, 2007 15:18 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep up the good work! Can't wait for more.Fushiki-san? Hmmm, wonder if this will develop into a "love triangle". Would be extremly interesting... A smile crept on my lips whem I read the conversation between Tezuka and his mother. Poor Tezuka, Go mom! I hope that passionaye kiss between him and Ringo will come. But don't rush it... when you feel like putting it up. Still have to develop their relationship, ne? Good work, keep writing.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 12:04 EDT
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Fushiki-san? Curious. Very curious. I can't wait to see what new developments this will bring about. And it should be quite interesting if Ringo does find that guy she's related to. I know that school sucks, but I still hope you can post another chapter really soon.
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Title: LDYMOON
Reviewed By: ldymoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 01:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I JUST WANTED TO SAY THAT I STAYED UP AND READ CHPS 1-14 IT IS NOW 1:47 AM AND I FINISHED READING IT. I AM WAITING FOR YOUR UPDATE, THIS IS A REALLY GOOD STORY AND I LIKE YOUR OC. I THINK SHE'S GOOD FOR TEZUKA! ANOTHER THING I AM SO HAPPY TO FIND A NON YOAI STORY ABOUT THE REGULARS FOR REAL!!!! YOU'VE KEPT THEM IN CHARACTER AND I LOVE IT UPDATE REAL SOON YOU HEAR! XD
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Title: good
Reviewed By: dawn m [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2007 04:30 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep up the good work? sounds kind of lame for how much i am enjoying this series and hoping to keep reading more of your work. i thank you for a very fine read i am looking forward to more of this story.
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Reviewed By: Raluca On: June 19, 2007 17:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE your story! I am really glad I found a story that had Tezuka Kunimitsu in it and I congradulate you for it, it really is a chalenge considering Tezuka-kun is a difficult character to write a fic with. But it really turned out really great. DO NOT STOP!!! The story is original and extremely entertaining from my point of view and you captured Tezuka's character and essenece really well. POT is one of my favourite anime because it has so many complex characters and also tennis is my no1 sport. as someone who plays tennis I think the description of the match between Ringo and that senior girl(chapter 12 I believe I can't remember her name gomen nasai)was awsome as surreal as it was. The ballerina ideea was brilliant ^.^ Also your use of Japanese is really cool, I just love that language, glad I'm learning it. Ok I'll finish now, It's kind of a long review, but it's a bad habit...^^. Good luck with the story I can't wait for some romantic moments between Tezuka and Ringo, but take your time and don't rush it, write them when you feel like it. Well that's about it. Good job with this story, honestly. Mata ne.
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Title: Nice job!
Reviewed By: Chokocat On: June 19, 2007 04:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The skies turned gray and the ground shook, and thunder growled from overhead, the fork of lightning illuminating their faces." hahahahaha that part is sooo funny!!!!! Well anyways, the story is great soo far. Update soon, kay? & huggs & kisses!
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