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| "Moonlight Princess" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Great Job!
Reviewed By: MoonBunny777 On: August 30, 2007 00:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww this story was so cute! At one point i had to sqeak hehe! I really enjoyed it though had to find a really good fluffy fic. I think you did it perfectly! I love the story i wish that you would write more. With Serena in Inuyasha time period i think it would be amazing! Great job! I really loved it!
| Reviewed By: Snow drop On: January 22, 2007 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote well but your words were stuck together and some were missing. Also, chapter three had very little plot but a whole lot of romance. Overall, it was good but it could be improved.
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