Reviewed By: mimarin On: June 12, 2002 02:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Finally, a Megumi fic dealing with her feelings for Kaoru. You picked a perfect scene to novelize; such an intense exchange lends itself to much interpretation. (Personally, *I* think Kaoru deserved a beat-down for that vegetable-like behavior... then again, maybe I'm biased too.) I can totally imagine these thoughts running through Megumi's head. You might wanna fix your formatting and eliminate the Japanese words, but good job. Me likes. |
