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| "Clipped Wings" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Reviewed By: freezewind [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there. This seems to ba a well thought out story, I've enjoyed the first two chapters and i can't wait to read the rest. The fight scene was really well done, I think that was one of my favourite parts. Just one thing that I noticed. In the fight scenes you gave more descriptions than you did outside of them, I'd like to see more descriptions, like of the surroundings, weather, that kind of thing. Overall this is a great start to what promises to be an interesting fanfic, keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: xfalling_star_angel On: January 15, 2007 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...that's really awesome....you should continue this! when's the next chapter comin'? =3
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