| "Secretes withing the Pack" Reviews/Comments [ 41 ] |
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2008 17:28 CDT
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this is a good story so far, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2007 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story!! please update soon!! can't wait to see what happens!
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Reviewed By: animeluver4-evr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
muwahaha! guess who it is...>.> ur doin a great job here and i luv this story!! keep up the good work chick!! XD luv ya!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 02:03 CDT
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Hay! Nice story I'm a new reader that means you have a new reviewer for this story...so you know what that means....You have new inspiration to keep writing and updateing this story faster...XD...I love Inu/Yu Yu crossovers they are so great....XD...and your is no exseption I mind you....XD....In that last chapter its too bad that Kagome didn't use her Ice powers to cool his lips it would have gotten crazy if it did....not saying eny thing would have happened but it still would have been great to read Hiei's reaction....that would have been funny....so the the next chapter is going to be the daring rescue of Kagome's little meko sister....that is so koo her sister is a meko to...well any ways I personaly love this fic and would be so happy if you updated soon ....Please and thankyou.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 07:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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awesome plz continue
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 03:55 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this sotry but I was a little confuseddid part of the chapter repeat? Please update soon
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Reviewed By: dark_angel_of_death9 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 02:03 CDT
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wow this is so so cool please update soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2007 01:39 CDT
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Cute. I like getting the scene from both POVs. And I really hope you're going to follow through with what his conscience keeps warning him about -- send some other males after her! Make him have to work to win her. THAT will be fun! Oh, and I loved it that Kuwabara "saved" her from him once. LOL!
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Reviewed By: Inu Riko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 00:55 CDT
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dude! that song, i used it in a music video i did about child abuse!
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Title: OMG this is the most awesomest story like ever i so love it
Reviewed By: Inuyashalover161 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome story i love it so far all though it saddens me about inuyasha and everyone elses death i love the story its one of my favorite im going to stick with you and keep reading this awesome story im going to add you to my favorites and im going to also add your story into my favorite you are like one of my favorite authors i cannot wait for you to update i understand about soccer practice im in soccer to i hate getting up at 5am every morning it suck i got practice every morning so i know what its like try your best on the updates though but don't rush it take your time because your an awesome writer i lover everything about this story i love hiei hes so awesome i think the whole thing with Sesshomaru adopting kagome as a sister that is awesome and i love how she wished to become a full demon i hope hiei tells kagome how he feels no offense to inuyasha but i think kagome make a better lover for hiei anyways because they understand eachother its so awesome like every lover they have fights and i think that makes it so commical when they have outbursts at each other your a fanomial writer here is my email address i would love to be your friend iluvsesshomaru_161@hotmail.com if you got msn add me if you'd like i would love to get to know this truly awesome writer well i got to go though i do promise to review everytime you update and i also swear to continue to read this story and other stories you write as well thank you so much for your latest update i love love this story well i got to go because i need to go to sleep for work so i will keep checking for your latest updates your #1 fan *hugs you* Your like the best writer out there you got some raw talent keep writing well keep it realz your #1 fan *hugs you good night*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 02:45 CDT
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Well, I guess they will both be over their denial in the next chapter after that little revelation of Kagome's. Mating season is coming up, huh? Planning to have someone come for her? It would serve Hiei right to have to try to win her after being such a jerk to her all the time. Glad Naraku's been spotted. On with the action!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2007 00:15 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update soon... it took to long last time, two months too long.. well cant wait, to see what you have coming...
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 18:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! the end was hilarious, lol he fell off the bed! i could picture it in my mind and it was pretty funny! great chapter! update soon!
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Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 16:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chappie really funny...cant wait till you update...
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2007 00:52 CDT
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So now Naraku has Kagome's little sister. That's frightening. What a horrible dream she had! (At least, the first part of it ...) Shame on Kurama and Botan laughing at them like that -- and taking pictures!
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