| "My Stardust" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: Hivetyrant On: May 12, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it has potential, but I think you could due to watch a little GSD again. As for the grammar, space out your paragraphs, change paragraphs when different people speak, and work on your spelling and punctuation. Other than that, so far, so good.
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Reviewed By: Ha-Ha On: January 20, 2007 12:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
great!! Druggies LOVE!!! you're OC is a reall scene taker!!in one word.. She's cool!! I am so sad for her.. to see her little sis like that. Stellar is her litle sister isn't she?? where does Miss. Loussier know Lacus from.... I ''ll have to wait
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Reviewed By: biba On: January 20, 2007 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
...................................... I want you to update :D
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Reviewed By: ikki On: January 20, 2007 12:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Howdy!! just wanted to say that I like this fic! really original! if I had and account I would add you to favs!! but I don't....I will make one , one day!! I want a next chappie!!
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Reviewed By: I am So busy! On: January 20, 2007 12:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
fantastic!! its amazing how you could let the girl talk without one time saying her subordinates her name!! you want us to wait he!! Stellar Loussier has sister.....aww Shinn was so sad! what will the gurl do now?? will she attack Shinn?? thinking that he klled her Sister?? Kira and Lacus know her??? form where?? :( please update soon! I can't wait!
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Reviewed By: butter_ On: January 20, 2007 12:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good work on this one!! I really enjoyed reading it! the woman( you're Oc) is really cool!! but what is her name?? I really want to know that! and that will only happen if you update!! :D she has a secret plan....O_O wants to wipe ou ORB, Zaft and the EA!!! but she will fall in love wiht Athrun ne? O_O how difficult for her...he is on the other side :D update! and LOVE THE DRUGGIES FOREVER!
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Reviewed By: Kick ass dude On: January 20, 2007 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
good work on this one! the woman is Stellar sister isn't she? the name of her Battlehsip is awsome!! please update soon! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Godess On: January 20, 2007 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic!! she is Stellar's sister??? and will she fall in love wiht Athun?? O_O wow!! that would be sweet! :D you can improve you're grammar but thats nothing! :) hope you update soon with another chapter
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Reviewed By: like it On: January 20, 2007 11:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic! why does it have only one chapter! you're killing me! it must be Stellar's sister! what a reaction to see you're little sister dead in the arms of a soldier you suppose to have killed!! the enemy!!! I like her attitude!! please update soon! sorry for the long review!! :D bye!
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Reviewed By: Bonjour On: January 19, 2007 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello, Infinite Sky. I really enjoy your story, it's cool! Oh, and yeah, is she Stellar's sis? And AxOC? AuelxOC? Love your story ^__^ I'll look forward dfor your update. Glory to the druggies~
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Reviewed By: Bonjour On: January 19, 2007 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hello, Infinite Sky. I really enjoy your story, it's cool! Oh, and yeah, is she Stellar's sis? And AxOC? AuelxOC? Love your story ^__^ I'll look forward dfor your update. Glory to the druggies~
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