| "Blissfully Unprepared" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2008 19:57 CDT
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this is a great story so far. i hope your mother is getting better
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Title: Get well soon ^_^
Reviewed By: Silverkitsune26 On: August 21, 2007 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello ^_^ I hope your mother will get well soon. I hope it's not too serious and that they can do something about it. Love your story, and update when you can. To you and yours a good day and good health. Love ^_^
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Title: Good Luck
Reviewed By: Youshiie [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 19:28 CDT
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I'm Sorry about you mother...I really love your story but I understand it can wait...Please don't forget about it!!!! Good luck. And thank you for letting us know...Your still on my favorites, and you will stay there. -Youshiie
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Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is great, can't wait to read the next chapter!!
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Mousers18 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 12:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
keep writing=D
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 05:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please update soon.
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Reviewed By: angeltsuki [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 18:39 CDT
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I found it! Yay me =3 I still love your story! WRITE MORE!!!! *latches onto your ankles* pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ase? ASAP would be nice =3
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Reviewed By: SadBrokenWings [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 20:56 CDT
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Wheee!!! -lol- I just found the sequal, isn't that funny? Anyways, this is an awesome sequal so far and I just can't wait for more.
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 21:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, shame about their mother and grandfather.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 22:58 CDT
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Oh yay! I had forgotten this was one of your stories. Very interesting interaction with Naraku, the Jagan, Kagome, and Hiei. It's a shame she and Hiei couldn't spend a little more time together there in her mind, but I guess she needs to go kick some demon butt, ne? Or will Naraku pull them all back now that he has visited her? I almost wondered for a minute there if he was going to try to control Hiei and have him rape her. That was evil of him to taunt her about Inuyasha and Kikyou. Loved the tidbit about Hiei being able to sleep since he's been staying with her. This is just another one your stories I love!
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Reviewed By: lildevil474 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 19:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a really great story! I can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 15:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell yah I love that so Hei has control again?...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2007 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice keep it up.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2007 16:02 CST
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Very interesting beginning! I liked Kurama telling his family his story and about the danger. I especially liked it when his stepfather was thinking it couldn't be hormones that made a teenage boy look like a man with fuzzy ears -- LOL!! So, kagome's mom and grandfather are dead, but Souta and Yukina are still okay. And Kohaku's going to help them, ne? Very interesting! Naraku's still stalking Kagome through Kanna's mirror. Hmmm. Wonder how much hold Naraku has over Hiei? Still waiting/hoping for that Kagome/Hiei relationship to flourish! I'll have to go back and read "Just Another Story" again. This was an awesome chapter! Can't wait for more!
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