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Reviewed By: stevie736 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2009 10:34 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I can't wait to check out the part three.
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Reviewed By: blackorcid On: February 16, 2009 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just because this fic totally kicks ass!!!! and its so well writen. i get home and theres not one chapter but LOADS!!!! im so happy it made my day. once again this fic is brillent and im looking forward to the rest
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Reviewed By: blackorcid On: August 19, 2008 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow once again you've wrote a really great fic, i find my self coming home for work and turning on the laptop just to see if you've updated, although i'm dissapointed if u dont but im patient and i can wait for something as greatr as this. your discriptions were really great in this fic the wedding especially i could really picture it like i was there. i like the use of songs too i looked them all up when ever they were mentioned and listerned to them just to get the feelof things and it works great!!! your are really brillent and my friends must have read this by now because i REALLY wont shut up about it!! cant wait till the baby is born either . i cant wait to see how this will be done and i REALLY cant wait to see that murderer behind bars i'd love to see how that plays out. well once again u are a fantastic whriter please keep going and i cant wait to read the next bits
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Title: Wedding Conflict
Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 22, 2008 23:47 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you keep it real. Mother Lane's family paying for part of the wedding was awesome!! I think this put the two of them on more equal footing. I love the way you had them to throw out that old '#&*&@#' she was the one that open her mouth and stuck her foot in. Good for Estelle, I love that woman!! Great job as usual
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Title: Dress to impress
Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 02:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have my dress ready, so I'm there! As usual the chapter was great. But I wanted to know will we know what their having...no don't tell me! I can wait. your updates are worth the wait because they are so long, bless you! (Bowing down) LOL
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Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2008 01:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You did it again! I'm so happy you updated so soon, This is a great chapter you rock!!!!
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Reviewed By: AKASHA721 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great addition to the story. It made me wish I could see how she pop those balls out. I heard about that somewhere a long time ago. Great job, great story!
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Title: Satisfied. . .FOR NOW!!
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 14:53 CST
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As expected this satisfies my hunger. . for the moment! I can't wait to see what will happen to Diana. . .I can't believe she would do such a thing. . .actually I can. It is so cute how they completely switched roles in their relationship. Makes me wish I had something like they do! and wish that the "Carrier-Killer" will DIE! By the way This is the best carrier story is have read with DEE(not Ryo) being pregnant. I was really sick of seeing Ryo be so. . .submissive. NOW IT DEE'S TURN!! But anyway enough with me blabbering . . .continue to update and you will continue to hear from me for I will be staring at my computer screen waiting for that one special email. ~MangaChild420
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Title: Addicted
Reviewed By: MangaChild420 aka A.J. On: November 09, 2007 18:07 CST
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I love this story. Each time I see an update in my Email I go crazi and immediately read it. I love the way you write and how Dee and Ryo are progressing in their relationship together. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!
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Title: TRUE FAKE FAN
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 01:43 CDT
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Please don't leave me hanging. OMG Dee passed out, what about the baby. OMG....Ryo is going to be frantic, not to mention Bikky. Even Rose might be a little upset. Please Please update soon. p.s. thanks for the hook up with the FAKE EXTRAS their awesome. Let us know if you get anything about the sequel. Great update.
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 23:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just gets better and better!!
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Reviewed By: FoxCat [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2007 12:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O_O whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy cliff hanger!!! T.T wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh but thank you for updating!
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Title: ^-^
Reviewed By: DarkFaRiE01134 On: July 01, 2007 11:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
10++++++!!!! I love this story! I read the first one 'The Unexpected' and I can't wait for you to update!!!
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Title: WORTH THE WAIT
Reviewed By: Daxemon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2007 08:38 CDT
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It was worth the wait and it continues to push the story along quite well. I can't wait till they catch the killer. I'm so worried for Dee. There baby is going to be sooooo cute. I wish there was some way for us to see what a DEE/RYO baby would look like. I can't wait till the next update when they get to see the Atrium, I bet its beautiful. Till next time and Thanks.
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Reviewed By: FoxCat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2007 07:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For me this fic has always been worth the wait..(even if it does drive me crazy sometimes >.>)
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