| "She Is So Loved" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Title: all right the best one
Reviewed By: rosina On: May 08, 2009 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story was amazing now tell you one more thing plz i never cant read a story which is against mariah plz i wish you make fight of ray and some other lovers of mariah for her i will really enjoy it
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Title: She is so loved
Reviewed By: Selena1715 On: June 27, 2007 21:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
So Cool!!!!! go on! I want to read the next chapter!!!!! you're so cool!!!
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Reviewed By: Visitor On: June 07, 2007 18:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like the fact that the story is about the white tiger. There are not too many story about them. But I have to point out something. 1 - No author note in the middle of the story. Its distract from the main story. Put it at the beginning or at the end. If you are worry that something is not clear, well maybe its a sign that you need to think about it more that it. 2 - When you want to changr scene make it more subtly Putting " Now the bladebreaker" will also distract from the story. 3- I know it ooc and au, but thing have to make sense as well. Mariah, racing when she's 13 only because shes neko-jin, you have to have another explination, because it make no sense. Also the summary are, well, its obvious that you didn't really work on it. A summary is there to tell the people what the story is about. The two summary you put, I wondering if it for two different story. Anyhow, I like the fact that you making a story about White tiger, but i am a little let down by the story.
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Title: ^__^
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good. Now for a fan moment... WE LOVE YOU MARIAH! WOOOO! PLease update!
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: Amanda Stewart On: May 17, 2007 08:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Finally. A Mariah story that's not bashing her. A Mariah-centric story. It's about time. Please update asap. What's the pairing? Why don't you post this story on FF.net?
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: Mariah's #1 Fan On: May 04, 2007 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm still waiting for this story to be updated ... or even post on FF.net. Please? I rather read stories from FF.net than MM.org. I know you mentioned that this story will have lemons, but who cares? I mean, you do know that this story is read on MM.org too, right? Pre-teens, young kids, won't listen even if you warn with about lemons, swearings, ETC. They'll read it, but won't listen. They'll ignore it and read the story anyways. Right? If this happens on MM.org. It'll happened on FF.net. You can't stop it, so just forget about the younger kids and the haters (Mariah and lemon/lime-haters) and POST IT ON FF.NET AND UPDATE!!! PLEASE?!?!?!
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: Baby_Gurl1 On: March 19, 2007 09:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is good. Trust me. It sounds good. That is all I can say since you have only one chapter. But I think you should post this story on FF.net. Even though it has sexual contents in them ... just remember to post it on the summary spot and such. I don't know. I noticed that not many people like Mariah ... but people like her on FF.net ... ok? Plan on reading more ... so update asap
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: Anna (sesshoumarus_gurl005@hotmail.com) On: February 22, 2007 09:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hii! It's mee!!! From FF.net! Y isn't dis story goin to b in FF.net? I'm goin 2 bet u dat dis story will b more popular in FF.net than MM.org! I'll bet u! Plz post it on FF.net too, plz! Oh, n do answer my question; y don't u post dis story ... uh ... chapter on FF.net? N update a.s.a.p! ~¢¾Anna¢¾~ ¢¾~Sesshoumarus_gurl005@hotmail.com~¢¾
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: ~~Samantha~~ On: February 15, 2007 09:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. Ray is going out with a slut? A girl will have three of more boys chasing her? Damn. This story is getting interesting! Why do I have the feeling that Samantha is going to get cussed in any future chapters? This story is interesting. I think you should continue - like update another chapter. Why isn't this story on FF.net? Or won't? Ahh, whatever; you know what I mean. I think you should add one more chapter, or two, to get people's attention. Most people won't review because of a chapter. Not to mention; some people might save your story as a favorite and you might not know. I like this story because this story is about Mariah, there's not many of stories about her - BASHING HER DOESN'T COUNT! You got the point; I hope you update soon; I'll be keeping tabs on this, kay? UPDATE! Tell me the pairing, please? ... Just as long as Mariah gets paired up with someone cool ... NOT RAY! A little jealous problem, too? Please update soon ... hehe. I write a little too much ... hehe. Oppz. Update your other stories too, would you?
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Reviewed By: animeboysrock23 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 18:24 CST
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please continue but when i went to your FF homepage and i didn't see the story anyway what the pairing for Mariah and is there going to be pairing for the rest this is my first reading Beyblade but anyway please update ASAP please
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Title: I Love Her ... We Love Her
Reviewed By: Mariah's #1 Fan On: February 05, 2007 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. I can't believe you didn't get any review for this story! Visits, yeah, but no reviews? That sucks! I love this story; a story that is focused on the White Tigers and Mariah - not the Bladebreakers or any other Beyblading teams. This is awesome so far. Is Mariah the sensitive type? Please update soon. Why isn't the story going to be on FF.net? I love this story. Please update soon. Please. Uhh, I think I kind-of missed it; but what's the pairing? Who is Mariah paired up with? Please update a.s.a.p! Please!
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