| "Dark Side Of The Moon" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: justsukiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 23:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
good start~ umm this is simply a suggestion, but can you space the sentences a little bit more? it's a little hard on my eyes when all the words & sentences are crowded together too much ~
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Reviewed By: justsukiya [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm intrigued by this storyline seems good & interesting~ I want to know what will happen between them later on! keep it going! I love Bakura/OC stories ^^
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