| "Secrets Of An Unworthy Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Shinigami
Reviewed By: Neko_Kiba On: November 20, 2007 22:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. That was AWSOME. Your descriptiveness was beautiful.
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Reviewed By: Unholy Alchemist On: August 26, 2007 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Still enjoying it! I'm looking forward to the next chapter, its really getting good now. The suspense is killing me, but take your time, we want the best quality work. ^-^
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Title: The Best Yet
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2007 18:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is by far the best bleach fic that I've read yet. I love the way you've explained the relationship between the two that the series just hints at. It is completely believable and really, really makes me feel for Gin. It so very sad. Also, your story telling method is very good. I have yet to get a funny look on my face trying to figure out what you're trying to do. Extremely well done. Well, I hope you keep it up, I'll certainly look forward to more.
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Reviewed By: CocoLime On: April 07, 2007 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, didn' you post this on ff.net also? You can look me up under the same name there, it'll be pointless cuz I don't do much. Yeah, great story, you should post the rest of the chapters here. Yeah, er, it's kinda cliche'd but better than the fluffy crap ya usually get. =D KISS-Keep It Short & Simple
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Reviewed By: Katterrena [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 02:58 CST
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Still a completely wonderful story! I'm really enjoying it!! Okay, a couple of grammatical and related things. 1) When you have speach by one character, don't have the actions of a different character in the same paragraph. It is confusing because you can't figure out who is talking and who is doing the action. 2) You have writen "on her won." I'm assuming that you mean "on her own." Dontcha love spellcheck? Marvellous story.
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Reviewed By: Unholy_alchemist On: January 30, 2007 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing, please write more soon, I'm really enjoying it so far. Keep up the good work, it truly is amazing.
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Reviewed By: Katterrena [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2007 05:10 CST
Comment/Review:
Very interedting so far. I'm looking forward to more.
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