| "Urban Legends" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: ResidentOtaku On: July 07, 2007 16:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God! ok, you are most definatly one sick puppy!!!! do you know that? yikes, its like some wacked out Tarantino movie!!! (by the way i love tarantino movies). so many twists, i changed my mind about 5 times on who the killers were!!! yikes, i'm gonna have nightmares now! on an analytical note: very well written, a few typoes here and there. the image of a 'Toe' truck was funny, a big toe pulling a car down the street, strange...but i guess you meant 'Tow' truck eh? i did seem a little rushed tho, but then i guess it was set in one month and i did just read it in one night. i must say tho i did skim over the bulma/goku bit...sorry but thats just wrong. lol. it did get a bit confusing in places, there were a few sections where i think you didnt put down everything that was in your head, you knew what was going on but readers arent normally psychic. overall it was amazing!! and now i have to go and wash my brain!!!
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2007 19:57 CDT
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Very nice. I enjoyed your story from beginning to end, and will definetely check out any other fics by you.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2007 19:00 CDT
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I never expected it to turn out this way. I have to tell you that I was so surprised wen I learnt who the killers were. The three people who no one would ever suspect. It was very well played, and it all came together nicely. It's just that I .. I can't beleive it was them. Now, to see what happens in the final chapter ...
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2007 18:18 CDT
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Goku is dead? Wow. This story just keeps getting even more interesting. Who are the two people who keep doing these things? Very strange it is ... with everything that's going on, the list of suspects is getting shorter. :( As always, I enjoyed this chapter, and I'm really looking forward to the next one.
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2007 20:53 CDT
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Very nice. They're starting to catch on to the Urban Legends now. It's still very mysterious, though, and I have a feeling that one of the main characters not killed yet knows something. Or maybe I'm wrong, and they're all clueless. Whatever it is, I'll be looking forward to it.
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 18:56 CDT
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Oh man. Another character gone. Poor Goku; he went into shock. I can almost imagine how he feels. I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to happen in the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 10:50 CDT
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I'm telling you; you were completely right about this chapter being a shocking one. I would have never expected it. Chi-Chi cheating? Goku and Bulma? I think a lot of things will be regretted in the morning. (By the way, thanks for the shout-out!).
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Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 22:44 CDT
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Thank you for updating one more time. I really enjoyed the chapter. I really like the whole suspense thing you have going on here. Trust me, it's keeping me right on the edge of my seat. I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next chapter, and who the next victim will be.
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Title: Awesome!
Reviewed By: MaraiTrunks [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2007 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Seriously, what's wrong with me? I've been reading your fanfic, and I haven't been leaving any reviews. I'm ashamed. Even more so seeing how great it is. I love your original characters so much. Just ... awesome. I'm glad to say that I'll be checking up every day to see if you add any more chapters.
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Reviewed By: The Enforcer On: March 01, 2007 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Greetigns, I can't wait to see more, I love this twist on the urban legend thing and the setting you've placed Bulma and Vegeta in... this story is just WOW. I haven't seen a well executed mystery fic in a long long time, please update soon!!! -The Enforcer
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