| "Taking Advantage" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Hidden in shadows On: August 06, 2013 20:38 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it wish there was more! |
Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: YaoiBatman [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2008 13:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love every moment of this fanfiction!! XD You do such a great job and Shino/Naruto is my secret pleasure!! lol I do how you write more soon. I just can't wait to see what happens when Naruto gets pregnant and see's Sasuke again. Or what Sakura is doing that makes her not get pregnant. She's probably doing it on purpose so she can keep Sasuke! ~but that wont work!~
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Reviewed By: cryspp On: August 01, 2008 09:21 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i've never read a naru/shino but that made me want to start looking for them
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Reviewed By: harderfasterplease [MediaMiner Member] On: July 31, 2008 21:46 EDT
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Am i allowed to gp in your story and kick Sasuke's ass? Yes? No? XD I love it so much. Great work. I've never read a Shino/Naruto fan fiction before, and I must say that i was one-hundred percent shocked when I saw the summary. But still, amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing amazing!
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Title: none
Reviewed By: Aurora82 On: November 27, 2007 20:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing is very easy to rend and under sand. As for the Grammar and Spelling will....I'm not very good at it so I'll live it blaek. The creativity is good real good but there was something missing to it and I have no idea why "errrrrrrrrrr...." I'm not a good writer, good ides but on paper. I just love it. I know it been all most a year but if you can update it that would be alsome, nice, great, pleasesssssssss!
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2007 23:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update this! It's been up by itself for forever and I can't wait to see what comes next. PLease do continue this story!
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Reviewed By: Shinobi-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 16:02 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been reading this chapter over & over again and I just love it each and every time. You did a wonderful job and I really hope that there are more chapters to come. I really want to read the reaction Sasuke will have when he finds that Naruto is falling for someone else. Keep up the wonderful writing ^__^
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2007 22:29 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O my god! I lurv thi pic! It's freaking awesome. The way u make everyone, pegging them in the most precise and wonderful way! *tears up* I actually cried in this! And i don't usually cry easily! The way u have it written is sooo awesome, i can't even give it the correct words! *is now left speechless* (P.S. I hope u update soon! :D )
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Reviewed By: monmon On: February 02, 2007 10:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oops... got the rating system wrong.... sowwie!
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Reviewed By: monmon On: February 02, 2007 10:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You don't see a lot of Shino/Naruto fics out there. I commend you for writing this in a believable way. Of course this might have something to do with my hating Sasuke. Anyways, great chapter and I hope to see another chapter from you soon!
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Reviewed By: SoraNao On: February 01, 2007 20:56 EST
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I haft to say that this is one of the saddest stories I have read in a while. I wish you would update soon. If I was the Hokage, Sasuke would have gotten more then a punch in the face.
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Reviewed By: llyoung On: February 01, 2007 13:14 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying your story very much. I hope the pairing at the end is shino and naruto.
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Reviewed By: InuyashaNaruto [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2007 12:55 EST
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Oh my that is so sad and heartwarming at the same time keep up the good work I really want to see who he ends up with I have to say I am baised to Sasunaru though!
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