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| "A Forgotten Heart" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: back to anime_otaku
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 17:00 CST
Comment/Review:
what's your email address? I need that to star with. after that, I need a rough draft of you chapter. after sending that to me, I'll edit it and send it back to you. you put the edited verion up on Media miner. I can also make sujjestions with the story line, and plus the fact that If you want, I can offer altervatives to words- kind of like a thesaurus! ^^
| Title: to WD, Kiki
Reviewed By: anime_otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: February 11, 2007 22:44 CST
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ummm yea u can be my editor person... Im just not good with spelling r grammer *sweatdrop* just send me a message and tell me what I nee to do...:P
| Reviewed By: WD, Kiki On: February 11, 2007 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sorry to say that this needs a lot of work. The grammar and spelling is taking away from this story greatly, somethings you take too fast, while others, painfully slow. The lack of punctuation makes things really confusing. If you need an editor, or something, don't hesitate to call on me, or anyone else. However, opn another not, this story line is very well used, And I like were you are going. Keep it up, revising is a good friend of mine.
| Reviewed By: x09-c On: February 03, 2007 14:09 CST
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oooooooooooooooooooooooh! cool begining, i luv the profiles! The dragon tattoo sounds reallycool, too! and i m sure that Ed has fun with it... heh, heh XD sorry for the disturbing images, i shall leave now! WRITE MORE!
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