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Reviewed By: kiarra On: September 26, 2007 20:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story you should write more :)
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2007 04:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love Inu/ Yu Yu crossovers so I started to read this then I notice you haven't updated it in a while so I'm thinking you probably gave up on it...but to truth in all honesty the first to chapters seemed to go by realy fast almost like a summory of the events...but I think this could realy be a great story......XD....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 10:06 CDT
Comment/Review:
update please
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Reviewed By: Purefire16 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2007 20:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Keep going.....
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Reviewed By: Hollow_Inuyasha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2007 14:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a really good storyline and it is enjoyable and i would like to read more of it. just i think in later chapters you should explain more and devlope the story a little more slowly. But the storyline is good and i hope to see more chapters up soon
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Reviewed By: hinageshichankyoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 14:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
It needs more and I am slightly confused, You seem to have a great story line behind it...just put a little more detail and it would be awsome.Good job through
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Reviewed By: Fox Vixen not logged On: February 04, 2007 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Comment/Review:
Put a lil more detail into it. Make it more interesting. In all truth I wouldn't be readin it if it weren't for the fact I saw the pairing. It ok, but I think u can do better. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: kagsfan On: February 04, 2007 03:55 CST
Comment/Review:
inuyasha is a bastard. i can't wait to see what happens next. update a.s.a.y.c PLEEEEEEEEEEASE! thanks
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