| "Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2003 12:18 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Well, I guess I'm not the only one going to rate the spelling for a 9.. The poem was sweet, really... full of expression. The teacher has a point giving you that A+. :) It was really nice. |
Reviewed By: Isis Alecia Malfoy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 20:39 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome poem! Very inspiring.
P.S. Please finish Harry Potter and the Phoenix Kiss. |
Reviewed By: Micah [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2002 17:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really great story that gives many emotion about the September 11 Tragedy. You certainly deserve an A+ because of the emotions and efforts you gave. Even though there's a spelling mistake you still deaerve a great mark, the mistake is that, the word "aparte" should be "apart". That mistake doesn't matter for 2 reasons 1)Only one spelling mistake 2)Even though there's a spelling mistake it still shows your efforts and emotions that you gave^^ You really try to make it sound great even its your first poem about the 9/11 tradegy.
One more thing, remember when you said to me that you and taylor are twins but how come you said in your biography that she's three year old. Also she's not three years old, actually she's/he's older than me. I'm confused, please answer that question^^ God bless!
~Milcah |
