| "A Bond Revealed" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Zofo
Reviewed By: Zofo [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2008 16:11 CST
Comment/Review:
That was really good. I loved how you told Vegeta's life story by having Goku live through the pain of it, and also making him realise that Vegeta really did hate him. Vegeta was completely in character through the whole story even with Yaoi hints, so hats off to you for that. I'm still not sure how Goku bonded him though, I get that one hated and one loved but I guess I've read too many stories where the bite is the bond that I expected it or at least sex. I would really like you to continue this to see how the bond develops now that their human mates are back.
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Reviewed By: Moonshine587 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2003 12:16 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great!! If you can find the insperation, you should really continue this. I liked it a lot! |
Reviewed By: Zorella [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2003 22:17 CST
Comment/Review:
It's not an end, it's a start. That's why it doesn't work you see? So, by my logic, you have to continue ;) |
Reviewed By: gemini On: January 22, 2003 11:32 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it ...but you can't end it here |
Reviewed By: SonKikyo On: January 04, 2003 17:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was pretty interesting. Not unlike anything I've read before but still thumbs up. |
Reviewed By: Zuci [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2002 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really really liked it. I want to see the next part. |
Reviewed By: Fate On: November 02, 2002 18:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a really interesting, emotionall but also rather sad story.. but now I can't wait for it to be continued! I don't think it is an ending you wrote there, because there are too many unanswered questions left. Maybe you should get off the storyline some more and let your imagination do the job some more =) Not that you didn't do that already, but sticking to the story too much will become rather boring. Just a little bit of advise, even tho I am not a write myself ^^; |
Reviewed By: HardCandyVegetto [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2002 01:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was so beautiful... i don't think there's anything yaoi about it. i love my friends. male and female alike. you can hold someone of the same sex without it being sexual at all. men don't ever understand that until they have nothing left to hold on to... like vegeta and goku. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Goku Mum On: September 19, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Emotionally very strong fic, well written, thrilling, and needs definitely a sequel. How will the deal with this, as Chichi and Bulma are back? |
Reviewed By: Vege_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2002 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The ending that story was ...beautiful. I can't even describe the elation that I feel and utter inspiration that you've set on me. I love your style, the way you make it seem like it's actually happening! I was at the edge of my seat... I have been and will always be a big fan of yours! Keep up with beautiful work, you have a true gift with words. |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2002 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, no, you can't end it here!! What's going to happen now that Vegeta has two bonds... one with Bulma and one with Goku? Same with Goku, isn't he bonded to Chi-Chi as well? You've gotta continue this. |
Reviewed By: rara24 On: August 03, 2002 14:01 CDT
Comment/Review:
Tiz a great fanfic fabuloush |
Reviewed By: SaiyaSith [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 19:23 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very interesting story. Great concept. I like it! |
Reviewed By: Vinni [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2002 23:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
Like it very much! |
