| "Be nice Vegeta!" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Pretty good...
Reviewed By: Queen Breeza [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2005 10:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the first few chapters there seemed to be weird characters popping up, but I could still read the story. Also, there were some sentence cut-offs. The story itself was funny, and I'm glad I had a chance to read it. I hope you plan to go on with the story...keep it up!^^
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Reviewed By: Sentje On: March 12, 2004 16:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whahahahaa!!! HAHAHAHAHAHA!!! *dies because of hartattack from the laughing* x_x;; (god that was funny! *telling to god*)
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Reviewed By: PeuTiFuL JaNe On: December 01, 2003 01:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hahha thats great!! i mean u read all these ppl wanting vegeta to be nicer or more emotional!! and these are the side effects!! :) keep up the kewl work!!
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Reviewed By: priss On: September 11, 2002 22:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMG i loved it! it's a change form my big mean hunk of man vegeta but it's funny none the less |
Reviewed By: chatcat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2002 07:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Mwhahhahaha! HAHHA! Woo, that's hillarious! I love the luzard monster bit, hehe update! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Liked it a lot keep it up and keep them coming. |
Reviewed By: animej [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2002 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VEGETA WAS CRYING?!?!?!?!?! O.O
Is that even possible?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? Well... anyhoo... I like the story! Keep it up!! ^-^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2002 03:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Now that was funny lol can't wait to read more. |
Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2002 12:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
OMK RUN THE HELL AWAY VEGGIE-CHANS ACTING LIKE A HAPPY-GO-LUCKY CHICK. NAD HES BEING NICE!!! *runs aroundpale and screaming about vegetabuls and nice then the rest in Japanese |
