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| "Enough" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] | Reviewed By: Ruby Roh On: January 19, 2008 09:06 CST
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Grrr, I should not review when it's late and I'm tired. Of course that should have read "This is one of the *few* that I've read". Apologies.
| Reviewed By: RubyRoh On: January 19, 2008 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I always suffer train-wreck syndrome with fics that have Schu losing his mind to his talent. This was one of the many that I've read that I really enjoyed. I loved your writing style and the imagery you were able to evoke with a few well-chosen words. Very glad I read this fic!
| Title: Zowie!
Reviewed By: KD Sarge [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2007 12:56 CDT
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That was amazing! Well done! Brava!
| Reviewed By: Jesslin [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 14:47 CST
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That was very intense, and evocatively written to draw the reader into the chaotic state of Schu's mind. Very nice.
| Reviewed By: Roxie Faye On: February 26, 2007 10:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
My God. I really liked the style in which you wrote it. You used a lot of simile and metaphor, for the imagery, instead of just describing it, which made the writing even better. And I'm impressed by the paragraph that's just the description of all the things he's seeing. There's so many random things in it, and they're all so descriptive! (And then there's the flamingos! lol) I thought Schwarz wasn't as snarky and dangerous as it should have been (and Farfarello is pretty sane, which I was surprised about). I've also read a few other "Schuldig's shields go down," stories so that should explain the originality/creativity rating. The thing I liked most about the fic was just the end, where he's trying so hard to read Nagi's mind, and then to communicate with Crawford. Communication DEFINES who Schuldig is, because of his gift, and his struggle, or inability to do so creates a lot of good tension for the story. I also absolutely love your description of Crwaford's mind as that cool window in the hot summer. It was the perfect, perfect description for the scene it was in. Honestly, I could picture the last scene, so beautiful, with extreme clarity, because of the description. I loved it.
| Reviewed By: RaceUlfson [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2007 21:38 CST
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I really enjoyed that - the narrative style, the sense of Schu slowly unraveling, and the bittersweetness of his relationship with Crawford. It was perfect.
| Reviewed By: annime On: February 15, 2007 01:30 CST
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That was intense and wonderfully written. I felt so bad for Schuldig and was glad Crawford took care of him in the end.
| Reviewed By: MikaSamu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 12, 2007 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Powerful and moving. You really make us understand what Schuldig is feeling, and without sugar-coating him at all, make us care.
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