| "Time Travel is Impossible, at Least for Humans" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: deviltiger On: July 07, 2009 13:10 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was rereading Coming Home At Last when I decided to check out your other KakaIru fics, this one caught my eye and I'm happy it did because it is wonderful. I love the idea of Iruka being a water creature, the way I say it doesn't sound half as cool as you wrote it.
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Reviewed By: Vesca [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2007 08:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yays! More! I love the idea for this story and am glad to see you post more, even if it such a small tidbit XD but a lovely addition... and it seems a confrontation with Mizuki is coming up... Looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: new-moongirl On: May 21, 2007 17:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
how sweet. :) i like this chapter, so nice.^_^
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yayy!! You updated!!! It was sweet.. Iruka finally did it with Kakashi! It's sad how the other Kakashi never got the chance... or will he? I don't know.. so update soon! PS: ya know how in my other review I asked 'is this gonna be a Naruto/Sasuke fic too'... well if you thought I didn't like N/S fics then your wrong. Just thought I'd let you know so if it does turn out to be one I'll still read it... boy did that come out wrong... I'd still read it anyway.. I mean.. ugh, you get it. So bye! I'm going to FF.net to see how many reviews you got over there.. I might review over there too.. you better have more reviews over there.. you deserve them. I really didn't know you had this on ff.net and if you already said this then I must not have been paying very close attention.. well SilverGreeneye said you have this on ff.net but I'm not sure. ~TS~ later...
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Title: Just Wondering...
Reviewed By: SilverGreeneye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 18:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First off, this chapter is great. You can throw your characters into highly improbable situations and have them react in unexpected ways, and it seems perfectly reasonable because you have taken the time to fully develop their personalities and motivations. Not many fanfiction authors seem to "get" that. With that said, I have to ask... why did you update this story on FF.net but not on MediaMiner?
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Reviewed By: new_moongirl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 17:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
how sad! kakashi died! and only sakura didn't! did iruka make the right choice? and is it going to merge with the other time line? T_T sob. this is so sad...and happy at the same time.
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Reviewed By: Teioke Sheay [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read this one too a while ago but didn't review sorry about that.. but I liked the update. It's real sad though.. the place he left behind. But I guess it's for the best! I'm sure Iruka wouldn't have wanted to see that. Are they going any further with their relationship, Kakashi and Iruka? It's cool how Itachi can be apart of his brother's life now.. and the little family. I'm sure Naruto is overwhemled. I like the idea of Itachi not going insane and killing his clan, as a lot of fics portray it that way. It's nice to see a fic where Itachi has a family and is growing less cold. As for the N/S fis... that's not going to happen here is it? Awesome story, though I would expect no less from an author like you, and update when you get the chance!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 00:29 CDT
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THe future is sad, but the alternate timeline has hope. I liek that. Very DBZ Cel Saga. Then again, I liked DBZ, even if the pace was rather slow at times. Still, this story rocks, and I enjoyed reading this update. Still, Iruka is gonna have to tell Sarutobei eventually about what's happened. Anyway, I love the story, I look foward to the next update. LAter
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Reviewed By: falling.right.side.up On: February 13, 2007 21:21 CST
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Yay! such a quick update! I would review at ff.net, but the site seems to be down; something about too much traffic or whatnot. Anyways, I hope you update soon! Oh, and make the chapters longer pretty please!
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