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Reviewed By: InuGoddess715 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 05:14 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW. Excellent chapter. I have REALLY missed this story, so I was so glad to see an update. And, boy, was this a GREAT one. It was mostly a lemon, true enough. And the lemon was HOT, to say the least. Inuyasha sounds so sexy anyway, but like he was in this chapter.....wow. But going beyond the sex...It's so obvious that Kagome and Inuyasha are better suited to each other, even outside the bedroom. Kikyo is so superficial, my goodness. And if she TRULY loved her husband, she would not reject him 353 days of the year. I'm sorry, but what kind of wife beds her husband 12 times a year, tells him he's not good enough for her in his most natural form? I think it's the kind of wife who's about to lose her sorely underappreciated husband. And Kikyo sees the writing on the wall; that's why she stormed into the bedroom at the end of this chapter. Inuyasha's demon didn't just screw Kagome; he went out of his way to make her feel pleasure, too. And that's what Kikyo saw. His demon has no bond with Kikyo because she hasn't let it....and she has just seen what a mistake that is. Inuyasha (or his demon side) isn't in love with Kagome yet....but it's coming. Because anyone would rather be with someone who accepts them fully, rather than somone who rejects most of what he is. I can't wait to see what happens next. Inuyasha'd demon side didn't seem to happy with Kikyo at all. Kikyo said she wanted her husband back...I think she knows full well she may have already lost him.
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Title: katie.ladyofthenghtsky@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Ladydot On: January 23, 2008 03:54 PST
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How stupid can kikyo be! Does she want to be killed? But this chapter was amazing! I do hope you update soon because this cliff hanger is a killer. Till then !
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 03:43 PST
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*squeals in delight, and bounces up and down* I'm so happy that you updated this story. I have been waiting forever for more of it. The claiming was perfect. So appropriate for his demon to think it just made sense for her to have at least some pleasure and yet not know what would please a human. Somehow, I imagine that once he finds out that females also can have orgasms he will try to give her those as well. And OMFG is Kikyou an idiot! Bad enough to interrupt the ritual, but to keep advancing when he is snarling and showing off his claws, and to top it off she called it an affair! She sooooo needs a lesson in what not to do in polite Youkai society. And I really hope she ends up with the scars to prove it. *bounces excitedly* Please, please, you absolutely MUST write more very, very soon!
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Reviewed By: future author On: January 23, 2008 01:15 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Squeals!! I'm so glad you were finally able to update this story. I've been waiting a long time for an update. Great chapter by the way. i wonder what will happen to Kikyo for her intrusion. I can't wait to find out. I hope inu scares the shit out of her for being rude. Update as soon as you can. until the next update, good luck.
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: Autumn the reviewer nsi On: January 23, 2008 00:59 PST
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lol I was checking my email as this popped up. Wow. I was so happy to see this story finally updated. It's been too long since I last read it, that I had to re-read the other four chapters first. It was such a great chapter, and the cliffy just made me want more. I do hope you update sooner, rather then later. This story is unique and has so much potential. The lemon scene was perfect. Who would have thought that Kikyou would be stupid enough to enter the bedroom, before dawn? LOL hilarious. I soooo hope Kikyou gets hurt. Is that too evil of me? Anyways, please don't take too long to update. I love all the stories you've written, but this one is special. Keep up the awesome work!
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Reviewed By: kagomesdouble07 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:43 PST
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are u kidding me...she's just gonna barge into the mating ceremony like that! i can't ait to find out what happens next^_^
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 00:31 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome & inuyasha are doing the mating ritual with witnesses... kinda embarassing... but things seem to be going well... until of course kikyo had to barge in... hope sesshoumaru and the consulate members drag her out and scold her... or maybe inuyasha will scare her off... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: CatLover260 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 13:55 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story and hope you haven't abandoned it since it hasn't been updated in a while. I want to see how it works out and how Kikyo gets the boot. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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Reviewed By: youkaineko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 00:29 PST
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As the tryptophan coma wears off (otherwise known as Thanksgiving), it's time for people to make their wish lists. Let's see what do I want for xmas… hmmm… I know, a new chapter! Please update soon. Happy holidays!
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Title: just dropping by
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2007 23:57 PST
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I hope that your life is just plesanlty busy and that this story didn't just fly away from you because it was really an interesting start. I hope I see more!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 10:52 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Please don't drop this story. It's an original piece of art. Can't wait to see what happens.
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Title: Checking
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 21:54 PDT
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Busy week, no internet, and no update on this story. WTH? I hope you update soon, I probably won't review everytime because I don't want to annoy you...yyyeeeaaahhh. Please update soon.
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Title: Ok
Reviewed By: Kakashisgurly [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2007 18:44 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok that's it. from now on, everytime I check this f-ing story I'm going to leave a review. That's how much I want you to update!
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Title: so..painful
Reviewed By: kimmi On: August 20, 2007 01:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is LEGENDARY! The wait is excruciating so I just hope you will finish it someday and not abandon it! XOXO
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Reviewed By: tif On: August 17, 2007 20:15 PDT
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pls... update pls... pls... been waiting and waiting!!!!!! pls.....
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