Title: Nice. Really!
Reviewed By: KitsuneKage [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've done a nice job on this. It seems pretty well thought-out, very few grammar/spelling mistakes, and an overall interesting plot-line. There were a few parts that were a little sketchy, but nothing bad. I enjoyed your characters: they all seem pretty well-developed. It seems, though, that the mother is all over the place... of course, you may have a reason for this. Overall, very nice: I'm wanting to read more... like now. O.o But take your time, don't rush because I tell you to. Ja ne!
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