|"Totally Captivated" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]|
| Reviewed By: Relaxing Pikachu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:26 CST|
Oh, just thought I'd add on something. By "continuing", I wish you could write how the contest came along. lol
| Reviewed By: Relaxing Pikachu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2007 17:24 CST|
Style of Writing: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This was a very nice first chapter, I just wish you'd continue with it. I know you are probably expecting some constructive criticism here, but I can't think of anything to offer. This a great story so far, and everyone seems so in-character. Keep up the good work.
| Reviewed By: loveinuyasha911 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 00:15 CDT|
Overall Rating: 10 of 10Comment/Review:
this was so funny...