| "The Greatest Gift" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Kitsune1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2012 03:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Are you planing in continue this fic? Its been 4 years since the last update, I really apreciate if you answer my cuestion. Its a great fic with a good plot, it will be shame you abandone it. |
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: November 10, 2008 17:59 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its 2008 now....where the hell are you at! Gosh its been a long couple of months, I had ALMOST forgotten about this fic, when lo-an-behold I stumble apon it......again ^^' Do please update, it hasen't been THAT long, but should you leave it for too terribly much longer everyone (myself included) is going to think you abandoned it! Gaah! That is, if you haven't already... :( Do please make an apperance, even if its only an 'Im alive' note. Heres hoping for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: PirateCaptainBo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2007 17:31 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHH!!! No far. we don't get see what happens next with Sesshoumaru! !! UPDATE SOOOON!! XD Please!
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Reviewed By: MistedVines [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 13:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perfection. Please tell me you haven't stopped writing this? This is far too good a story to be dropped. PLEASE continue! I'll simply wither without more chapters ;-; This is the first InuYasha/Sesshomaru I've found that has ANY semblance of a plot line. It would be a crime to stop writing it. I hope you continue, I'll be keeping an eye out for more chapters!
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Reviewed By: memorietrail@bellsouth On: March 21, 2007 15:57 EDT
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i do hope you are going to write more.
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Reviewed By: B121 (Sesshoumaru's Incarnate) On: March 12, 2007 22:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the most astounding fic I have read in a very long time. Believe me when I tell you that over 99% of the other Inuyasha fics fail in comparisson. I have no constructive criticism to give (as I usualy have for other fics) as I see nothing wrong at all with your story. I also ask of you to please update it A.S.A.P.! Because I literally can not wait to read what will happen next! You, writer, have talent, so it's time to show it off!
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Reviewed By: Angel of Androgyny [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 16:01 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked it and hope you continue I think you should stick with the name Yashamaru.
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: February 27, 2007 14:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have the flu so I cant write a great review so I'll just give you 10's Im sorry, but I really cant think right now, my head is filled with fluff. I do know that it was a great chapter that I read ^^'
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Reviewed By: Kibou32 On: February 27, 2007 13:17 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your style is great... but to be a 10, you'd have to be a GOD and to be a GOD, you'd have to be like Sueric-sama (does not write fanfiction) or like Silverblue Sakura.. etc. Anyway... I personally like the name Touga as is the name of that fabulous scheming redhead in Revolutionary Girl Utena, so... there's a name. Keep on writing.
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 19:16 EST
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i LOVED that chappy can't wait to see what happens next.....i like the name Yashamaru...and i want to know what sess has cookin in that mind of his....also what Lady Satori wants with inu-chan
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Reviewed By: LadySess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 03:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey love the fanfic can't wait to read what happens next so please update soon......i could so see their father acting like inuyasha when he was younger
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: February 17, 2007 22:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My favorite sentances outta this whole thing where "Welcome to my world… I have to put up with all three of you…' Myouga thought glumly." and "I just want Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha to have children that'll drive them as nuts as they drove me." Myouga had to smother his snickers at that comment. `That's what your parents said about you…' Inu no Taishou raised an eyebrow at Myouga. "What?" he asked, completely oblivious to the thoughts passing through the flea's head. "N-nothing, my lord…" Inu no Taishou squished him anyway." Beautifully written and finny as hell. Cant wait for the next installment :)
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Reviewed By: Weath of R. On: February 17, 2007 22:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love Inu/Sess stories! I also love the fact that you care about the quality of work that you post. Your spelling and grammer were excellent; there were a few places where your syntax seemed a bit off to me, but that just may be a preference for a different style of writing. Overall, your fic is very good and I hope to see more of it soon!
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