| "Take It Slow" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2007 17:57 CDT
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Your story/artwork has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting is open April 1, 2007 - April 30, 2007. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 15:25 CST
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Wonderfully done! Just the perfect amount of foreplay to sex, and very well written. What a treat! ^^
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2007 08:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that was majorly hot! Great job. You do the characters justice here. And damn, that hot and bothered feeling just won't go away.
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Reviewed By: Princess Tiger Lilly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 02:15 CST
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extra yummy!
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Reviewed By: anubis_himura nli On: February 26, 2007 09:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this! This is probably one of my favorite smutty stories because you did so well with description and keeping them in character. I liked that is wasn't a cliche first time thing, but a 'slow' time thing.. it was nice. ^^ hurray!
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Reviewed By: InuSaga (NSI) On: February 25, 2007 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Way to go, Patchy. That was all kinds of hot. I really enjoyed it. Not to mention you didn't fall into to many of the cliches so prominent in PWP. I give it two thumbs way up for sexiness.
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 14:48 CST
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Awesome! I like the way you managed to keep them in character. The tickle fight was a great idea to break the tension. It also seemed very.. real. Not many lemons of this kind can be found. You managed to equal hottness with love. Me bows to you! great work!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 12:21 CST
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I reviewed your first version (I think?) but your revised version is even better. I like your descriptions and characterizations. They are comfortable with each other and you've made their interactions very hot, but also sweet and loving. I like this one-shot and I hope you write more smut in the future. You're good at it. ^_^
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