| "Harry Potter and the Ninja students" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your slipping... Your chapters are too short. If your chapters are short, your story can't flow. If your story can't flow, your readers will lose interest. You have talent, just let in show... Regards, Siekuto.
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Reviewed By: Siekuto [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2007 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad. Short, but tis the nature of preludes. Keep it up.
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Reviewed By: zigyy553 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Potenial. That is what this has. Update. Just make longer chapters.
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