| "Kagome's Memories" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Jesen [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2008 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this series so far... I don't mind the colors themselves, but I do have a hard time remembering which color goes with which person. I can't wait to see where you go with this! You have the beginnings of a great story here, and when things really start to pick up, this is going to be a VERY interesting story indeed. I do have one question though... I understand that the Kyuubi (9-tails) is in Naruto still, but how many tails does the demon in Kagome have, if any? Or, is it a different sort of demon entirely? Oh, and thanks for the translations of the Japaneese(?) phrases... I've seen those phrases before, but i never knew what they ment. Now I do, so thank you! ^^ This will definetly be interesting... Kagome, with the Mangekuyo Sharingan and a demon... I can't wait ^^ All in all, i like this, and i hope you continue the series. -Jesen
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Reviewed By: kanibaby On: May 17, 2008 10:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was very good the colors did comfuse me a bit so speeling of writing si a little low heh spelling and garrmar i was not watching as much but 9 i think was a good choice i can;t wait to see were you do with this alright its good so far and i ually don;t ready storyies that have only 2 chapters byebye
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Reviewed By: LadyWolfRider On: October 12, 2007 22:44 CDT
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gaahh the colors they blind it is a great story but onegi no colors!!!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 22:46 CDT
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Pretty koo story, too bad theres only two chapters I realy wish I could have gotten further in to it well any way I hope you up date...XD.........I'm tring to figure out what exactly happened but it isn't clear yet Kagome was born in Naruto world and some how ended up in the future being raise in the future then falling in the well and shard hunting in the Inuyasha world but now she's haveing dreams of where she was born, I don't get it why now and not I don't know any other time for example...................Update soon.........................P.s. Love the fic.............Nyuka
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Reviewed By: i wear black deal with it [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2007 17:33 CDT
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omfg the colors hurt my eyes i cant even attempt to raed the yelow one... i like ur story but it is sooooooo hard to read with all the colors. i mean i can see why u do it but it takes away from the story... but ya if you could stop with the bright ass colors ur story would seriously be sooooooooooooo much better... update soon cuase even though the colors kills me, i like to read ur work... wow ive been saying the same shit over and over, so im just gonna stop.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2007 18:44 CDT
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you're gunna stop with the colors right? They confuse me Well anyways...its a good fic I really hope you dont quit
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf rider of the forest On: August 13, 2007 03:30 CDT
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NO COlOR IT IS CONFUSILING
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Reviewed By: dadada [MediaMiner Member] On: August 01, 2007 12:29 CDT
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Love the fic....but please don't use colors for when people speek and think....it confuses me. update soon please!
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Title: Update Information
Reviewed By: Holloweenhigh2 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 20:56 CDT
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I'll will update but I'm completely redoing the story...I think you'll see the point I'm trying to make.
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Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2007 04:26 CDT
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Cool chapter, btw, yea i agree, the colored chapters are harder to read other than when u just say wo is talking. please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Kags21 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it, very good Just keep it up, I see nothing wrong
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 12:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT WAS GREAT!!!I WANT TO READ MORE. BY THE WAY WHATS THE PAIRING? PLEASE UP DATE SOON! ja ne!
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Reviewed By: Talia_Naeva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2007 16:11 CDT
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As I said to another author don't demand reviews for updates. Write it for yourself. With that said, if this story had been written on a black background it would be fine, but it is written on a white background and is too hard to read particularly colors like aqua, baby-blue, and yellow. If you want to do more dialogue than story write it out like a script.
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Reviewed By: SISTERINLAW19 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 19:09 CDT
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youmight think im plain but i have tosay this i cannot stand colored writing it makes me so confused and i concentrate on colors instead of the story oh and please continue thif fic ja ne
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Title: Kagome's Memories
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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