| "Willing Prisoner" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Title: OH FUCK!
Reviewed By: Shikon-Tenshi-Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 02:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOLY HELL!!! THIS ONE IS ALSO VERY AWESOME!!! I SO LOVE THIS FIC!! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER ONE!!! I'm ALSO a fan of Kurone/Kagome/Youko! PLEASE make another one! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!
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Reviewed By: KawaiiGirl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2008 22:46 CST
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What a great birthday present! *le sigh* I'm really trying to get through this (especially since the reviews are so good), but the constant quotations are killing me.
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2007 02:32 CST
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*blush* =,=.....OMG this was a crazy One shot its very Kinky.....hehe.....*blush*.......Isn't Kagome just sooo luck I'm mean realy, but I agree with you on the ending it was kinda rushed but after all of the other stuff I don't think anyone realy minds much....hehe.....=,=.........I though it was funny when Kagome was ready to tell them every thing they didn't let her...that was so funny....I laughed so much during this fic....hehe...........I'm supprized Inuyasha didn't have a bigger reaction considering that he was locked up for over a year and all......If you ever did go back to revize this at all (not that it needs it I assure you) you could some how work in her story, like Shippo for example because he had to be the fox that taughter her that trick......hehe Shippo is the cutest...hehe......oooooooooooowwwwwww This was great story to read though it was one of the most perverted things I have ever read *blush* =,=........*caugh* it was realy ummmmmmmm Interesting to read.....hehe....=,=......ooooooooowwwww I just hope you realize that you wrote a realy good story here....hehe......................Nyuka
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Reviewed By: Lady wolf ridr of the forest On: August 14, 2007 00:06 CDT
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i can be a big pervert sometimes and now is one of them i whant to be in kags place dam it all no fair but it is a really good story and threesome once again no fair!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!really good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!did i mention i over react!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yep i really want to be in kags place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!^^!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!great story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!************************* ******************************************************!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*!!!!* |
Reviewed By: kokushibyou54 On: May 05, 2007 21:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome, I love this story and their threesome! Btw, is this story a AU or Canon? Sorry, I couldn't tell.
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Reviewed By: Clover_babe On: April 22, 2007 15:45 CDT
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woo. that was seriously hott. loved every single part of it.
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Reviewed By: XShootingStarX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 18:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
that has got to be one of the best threesome Ive ever read!! SQUEE!!! ^^' so can we expect a seqeul or sumfin? oh yeah one thing confused me. Im assuming this is in the past cus Kikyo is there and all, then you mention youko watches soap opera? i dont think they have tv 500 years in the past...but anyway dam that was hawt...loved the comebacks you came up for Kagome, they were funny as hell. great fic!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 17:45 CST
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I love how you made Kagome. It was so damn funny! But it was weird how Inu let them take Kag when he doesn't know the youkai and Kag is spitting threats at them, epecially after all she did for him and he just abondons her. But this was a very good stary! Happy Writings!
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2007 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was waiting for this for a long time. =] I loved it, who cares about the rushed ending. It was still perfection.
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 22:38 CST
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::Drools:: That's it?!?! No, I mean, it's REALLLLLLY good and all ... but THAT'S IT?! NO MORE CHAPTERS? Or sequel? Dudette; are you trying to kill me?! Well, it's SLOWLY working!!! So ... ::half an hour later:: Update? Uhh, or add/make a sequel? Please? Pretty please? ::Puppy Dog/Cat/FOX pout:: PLEASE?!?!?!?!?! ::Puppy Dog/Cat/FOX pout (just times 2) If you can resist that pouts, you are either; really strong OR really cold-hearted ...
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Reviewed By: -Tsuki-Hime- [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 17:26 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it....it was sooooo good!!!
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Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2007 12:02 CST
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AH!!! I loved it! It was so.... GOOD!!! I just can't tell you how good it was! It's too good for words!
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