Title: Sato/Risa Review
Reviewed By: Scorcher-chan On: May 15, 2007 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To me, this was truly an excellent work. The style of wrting was truly impressive. There were a few minor spelling errors, but everyone makes those at some point right? I also enjoyed the creativity of the bleunoirs story. It was very cute. I'm a huge DNAngel fan and an even bigger Satoshi fan so I thoroughly enjoyed this..(though I'm not too fond of Risa....)You really captureed the personalities of the characters which is hard to do when the characters aren't yours because you can't mold them and make them act how you want them to. I've tried many a time to write a Satoshi story (his love interest being one of my own creation. Robin by name.), but my stories are too long and the plot goes to pieces. I'm impressed by this and how cute it is.All in all, this is a really good work. Keep it up!! =^-^=
|
