| Reviewed By: Terthna On: July 30, 2007 19:31 CDT|
Style of Writing: 9 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
I have been searching for quite a while now for good Nanoha fics, and I have to say that yours is quite possibly the best I have yet seen. I love all the little references to other anime and other things you've made (especially in the opening to one of the chapters, where you mentioned Rozen Maiden and Cardcaptor Sakura, or when you put in the librarian from Disk World). However, pulling the main villain from Full Metal Alchemist was simply inspired, and I can't believe I didn't get who she was until chapter 6. References aside, your spelling and grammar could use a little work, but you could have probably fixed what few problems there were with a little more editing. All in all, I honestly love your work and look forward to seeing how your going to pull it all together. As an aside, I also hope that this will not be the only Nanoha-related fanfic you write.