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| "Toilet Training" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: lol!!
Reviewed By: chi2 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2007 11:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i have just this to say.......HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!
| Reviewed By: Punkrock_grl92 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 21:31 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW!!! I loved it!!! That was hilarious!!! I don't know where you got the idea that they were OOC, because I think that they were pretty well in character.. Great job!! ^-^
| Reviewed By: Inuyasha_luvs_kagome_forever [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 09:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was too funny ^_^ I could just see his face, like the episode where she makes a comment about her butt, Haha, i nearly died, ^_^
| Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 06:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol
| Title: Gotta go...Gotta go...Gotta go right now...
Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2007 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL, cute. You bravely went where most wouldn't dare to venture. I don't know why that subject is breached so rarely. Just like the toilets on the Enterprise that we know MUST be there... You almost never see mention of "going" in the canon. (I say almost, because there was at least ONE episode that comes to mind, where Miroku takes a little boy out to pee, and THAT surprised me.) Given the situation at hand, and the time frame you gave for when this took place, I agree, not out of character at all. I don't know about continuing it, though. Seems like a cute one-shot as it is. That's not to say that you shouldn't continue to try your hand at this type of story: with humor/actual dialogue/plot - as you put it. You should definitely continue to write more stories along those parameters.
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