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| "Lullaby (for the New World Order)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Reviewed By: phoenix_of_hell [MediaMiner Member] On: September 14, 2007 12:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sad, and touching, especially Near's comment, with the gods. Very beautiful story.
| Reviewed By: Soka-chan On: June 13, 2007 17:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So very very good. I gave it a 9, cause it's well-written and very original (I wish this writing post-chapter 107 wasn't so original, cause i love just about every fic happening then). I wish it was longer and I wish you explore another version of it. Anyway, good. Very good (also, creepy!Near is lovely, and Matsuda reflecting on others, specially Light and L, is very interesting)
| Reviewed By: Cantare [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2007 09:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Eerie take on the end of Death Note. I like that it's from Matsuda's point of view; I always imagined he would be the most torn by the discovery that Light was Kira. The mood of the fic is appropriately almost post-apocalyptic, melancholy and defeated even though they have technically 'won' against Kira. Thanks for a good read.
| Title: nice
Reviewed By: diablos42069 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was very good. There are a few things that seemed to be a bit off, but this is a fan fic, not the actual story, lol. It made me really sad though, I just finished death note and I cried when Kira died lol
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