| "The Portal" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: ...~slack-jawed, bug-eyed~...
Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2007 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O. My. GOD. I literally DIDN'T BREATHE when I read those last chapters, granted I breathed inbetween. I even CRIED. You know how hard it is to make me do that. GREAT JOB! If you want help with the title, let me know! ~Chelsea
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Reviewed By: animegoddess94inu [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2007 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
KOOLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its a good story i'll keep reading!!!!!^-^
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 18:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
YYYYYYYAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY! You added Artemis!!!!!! Thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyouthankyuthankyou!!!
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2007 17:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Grins scarier than Chuckie* RCR, if you don't update soon, I'll post a little authors note. Remember how you told me what would happen? *scary smirk somehow grows* BAD IDEA. For you, at least... Evilly satisfied, ~Chelsea
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 15:19 CDT
Comment/Review:
Good as usual, though I never thought Rai would be the "scheming" type. Keep up the AWESOME work! Your oldest fan, ~Chelsea (ps. Do you think Sabum Davis will be mad about me missing karatae tuesday?)
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 20:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
*Can't type, laughing too hard! please leave a message tuesday at 6:00* (I'll get you for that Naruto crack!) ~Chelsea
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2007 19:41 CDT
Comment/Review:
Sorry to bug you, but I noticed a few *cough...cough* grammar mistakes in chapter 24. You spelled my screen name wrong. animegir214? *giggles* smoothe...very smoothe... and the story is titled "A Feudal Fairytale: The Begining". Sorry, I'm being really picky today. SEE YOU TUESDAY! ~Chelsea
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