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| "A Life of the Unknown" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: inuyasha_is_s3xy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2008 18:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you have a pretty good start so far to a great fanfic... just that the grammar makes it very hard to read and a bit difficult to "fully" enjoy reading... if you would just reread/lookover your story (or get someone else to) before you post it, you could fix all the little errors and make it the best it can be... (because spell check just fixes words, not sentences. so even though things are spelt right it might not make any sense at all... ^^: ) anyways, you are on your way to a good fanfic... so keep trying :)
| Title: This was the worst story ever
Reviewed By: Katherine On: April 17, 2007 11:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love Vampire Knight but this was the worst story I had ever read. Sorry to say that "your" in your meaning is "youre" Or you are. Maybe if you had stoped to re-read what you had typed but this was horrid.You need to ask someone to pre read before you post. Sorry grammer is my thing I can't help it. I would enjoy if you continued or started something better but try that time and get someone to pre-read. ~thank you Katherine
| Reviewed By: gaara252 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2007 19:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
cool story! update soon!
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