| "Jealousy" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Now that's more like the Human Orihime!
Reviewed By: Lady_BlkDia07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2011 21:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hell yeah! Now that is true jealousy! Orihime should definitely be more like that! Be a true woman instead of an airhead with a banging body! Great work! |
Reviewed By: darklori [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2009 09:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The darkness in Inoue, I love it. She's always portrayed as this sweet, innocent slightly dim-witted girl, and I hate these images of her. Actually I just hate her. I was rejoicing when they said farewells to Inoue after Rukia supposedly erased her memories. But then she woke up and though she thinks it's a dream, she still remembers what happened, so it's probably not goodbye right? Oh well...
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Reviewed By: Inazagi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2008 17:05 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I throughly enjoyed this! As an avid Orihime-hater, I couldn't help but fire through the entire story A.S.A.P... XD. Great job, it was definately an original take on one of one of the few thoughts that run through Orihime's mind. I'll be reading much more of your stuff as soon as I get in from work! *Hugs* Anna xx
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Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2007 00:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dark and sweet! I loved it!!! How and the world did I overlook this gem??? This was a treat, for sure. Keep up the good work! gg
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Reviewed By: Crys Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2007 12:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
I would have liked it if Ichigo and/or Rukia ded, I sort of like death in fictional storys ^^' Well, it's still great
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Title: Loved it!
Reviewed By: KawaiiAirheadzXD [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2007 16:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Some people say i love everything i read and that may b true! well i loooooooved ur story! i totally thought that rukia or ichigo was going to die! lol! but keep wirting, you have a talent!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2007 19:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whew! I'm so glad it turned out this way. I was afraid that the darkness would win, and we'd lose either Ichigo and/or Rukia. You certainly had me tricked with the way chapter 6 ended - I was sure that was how it was going to end. Still a great read all the way around, though. As always, I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 19, 2007 19:12 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**jaw drops** Well, that was a surprising ending. I was hoping that it wouldn't end that way, but it was still a good, thrilling read. Oh, and the sex was good too. LOL It was an interesting take on jealousy and what it can do to people. Great job!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2007 18:39 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think I've run into any fics that deal head-on with the destructive (possible) effects of Orihime's jealousy over the fact that Ichigo falls for Rukia before (and I think that's one of the longest sentences I've ever written. ;p ). It's very interesting, and I am looking forward to see how this plays out (and hopes that that dream of Orihime's doesn't come true). Grat job!
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