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| "My first..." Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: Forgotten Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 03:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
that is really cute, and i enjoy reading it!!!
| Reviewed By: Keyoko7 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2007 00:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, that was sooooo sweet. Thank you so much for adding that new chapter. This story is AMAZING! Keep writting, I'm dying to read more.
| Reviewed By: Keyoko7 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 23:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG, I love this story! XD It's absolutely adorable! I know you probably wanted it to end there, but it'd be AMAZING if you wrote more. But hey, that's up to you. And as it is now, that does make an awsome ending. The only problem was that it was a bit difficult to read. If you go back and fix the grammar issues, then it's perfect. Keep it up!
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