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| "The Forgotten" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: akito_sweet_insanity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2008 14:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww, that's sad. You bring attention to something I never really considered before. I always noticed of course that the other warriors just seemed to be the cheerleaders standing on the sidelines, oohing and ahhing over everything that happened on the battlefield, but I never thought about how that felt for them. I guess I just thought they were clueless as to how useless they'd become. They were kind of a nuisance for me, honestly. Now I have to look at them differently, though. They definitely deserved this little tribute you created for them. Good job! :D
| Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2007 22:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow. very thoughtful piece.
| Reviewed By: Mia Skywalker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2007 12:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeah, the humans always get forgotten, it's sad. There are also very few fanfics that focus on them, as well. I like Saiyans, but sometimes it's annoying to see fic after fic about them and nothing about the others. People think, for instance, that Yamcha is cowardly and weak, but he certainly isn't. He and Tenshinhan pounded away at Cell even though (as Yamcha said) they were most likely to die, to give Gohan the chance to replenish his strength. You're right, though. Even they knew they wouldn't be able to beat him, all they were going to be able to do was distract him for a little bit. I like the humans. It saddens me that Toriyama kicked them off to the side that way. :( I don't really have constructive criticism for the fic itself. It would surprise me if Krillin ever expressed himself to Goku about it, although I think Yamcha expressed it to Bulma at the tournament before Vegeta went Majin. Good fic. More stuff about these guys needs to be written. :)
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