| "Leader of the Damned" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Shikon Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2007 04:25 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll have you know that I went and updated two of my stories because of you. (and my incessant need to find some new way to procrastinate from homework for classes) Anyway, lol I was just letting you know that you're to blame and if you don't go back and read them now, I will definitely have to go cry in a corner and eat a mayonnaise sandwich. I like your story by the way, but i agree with the need for a beta. God knows I should have had one through my heavier fanfic spinning period.
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 23, 2007 20:12 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the first chapter, But you might wanna have some one edit for you. I think that you could split every thing into more paraghraphs, E-mail me if you want help!!!
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