| "Dance Club" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2007 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's a fun, cute, hot little story. I liked the end!
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Reviewed By: Oriya-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 18:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
-Blinks- Mhmm.... Interesting. It seemed to fall flat at the end though. don't get my wrong, it was a well written story, but it did not have a satisfying ending. At least not to me. Heero was hot, but it seemed like they were both OOC. If they had switched places, same dialogue and everything, then I think it would be less OOC. I don't mean to put you down or anything, I just wish to give you some criticism. Grins. Nyah, that's about all I have to say. Ja!
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2007 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hot.
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