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"Iris" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ]
 Title: Review on 'Iris'
Reviewed By: BookWormKid [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2008 10:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 4 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
The prologue to 'Iris' is interesting. The first part is very poetic, but I think that maybe the second part could be chapter one. I gave you a nine for style of writing because it could be improved, but you have great potential! I gave you a six for spelling and grammar because many of things you wrote didn't make sense, although they were legible. I gave you a five on originality and creativity because I have read many fanfics similar to yours- albeit I give up reading them because angst is not my style. I think you could have been a little more original with the angst idea, and a little more creative to make your story stand out. I gave you a four for enjoyment factor, simply because I didn't enjoy the second part of the prologue. You revealed too much of the plot in the prologue. Overall, I give your story an eight- right now, it isn't too great (but not bad), but as I have already mentioned, I see potential. Try embellishing the characters more, and don't base your story on chance or fate. A good story is an interesting one; a great story is a credible one. ~BookWormKid
 Title: iris
Reviewed By: neko's buddy boo  On: March 29, 2007 10:45 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
told ya i'd review. 1 million out of 1 million! A little bit too angsty tho.
 Reviewed By: Aleic [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 26, 2007 14:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
looks interesting, hope you add more! don't be one of those fanfic writers that don't fisissh them

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