| Title: A decent begining...|
Reviewed By: Durandal [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2007 02:09 CDT
Style of Writing: 8 of 10Comment/Review:
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
This is, overall, a pretty good fanfiction. There are some minor story flow issues, but you seem to have a good grip on the feel of the Halo universe. You've got plenty of action, but a little more focus on character diversity and development would greatly help out you style and enjoyment scores. I encourage you to continue working on this. It's a fine start.