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"Trying To Think" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ]
 Reviewed By: BuggyCabaji_4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2007 13:57 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this, it's extremely creative. However, your gramitical errors made it difficult to read at parts. Please go back and spell check it. But other than that, it's great. As for the ending, I think you should make Elana and Nicole become animals that advise Chase and Omi. Don't get rid of them.
 Reviewed By: BuggyCabaji_4ever [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 22, 2007 13:56 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this, it's extremely creative. However, your gramitical errors made it difficult to rad at parts. Please go back and spell check it. But other than that, it's great. As for the ending, I think you should make Elana and Nicole become animals that advise Chase and Omi. Don't get rid of them.
 Reviewed By: Keyoko7 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 17, 2007 12:53 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Same here. People NEED to read this. Your story is SOOOOOOO awsome. I totally had the same idea of writting a fic that pairs up Omi and Chase. But I think Jack should just stick with his robots, he seems to love them more. Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: blondebrat2006 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2007 14:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
i cant believe no one has reviewed this story. this is really good. a lil confusing but i still lyk it.i cant wait till the next chapter comes. update soon plz.

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