| "Pretty When You Cry" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: vampress [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2008 22:41 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heartfelt story full of love & tenderness. I really enjoyed reading this hidden facet of Sess's. Ahhh, Inu is returning the love & not exploited it.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 03:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
and i forgot. why was sess crying? did you say it in the fic? all i got was he was thinking of someone special.
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Reviewed By: gen50 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 03:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice one. descriptions were flowing quite nicely. you were consistent with your pronouns except for one... i suddenly saw the name of sesshoumaru instead of "you". was there a reason for it? or was it an error? it was easy to tell it was sess because of the descriptions so i was surprised by seeing the actual name...
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